
I wrote a story in Grade 3;
Mom said she loved my work.
My brother Danny read it too,
and it just made him smirk.
Later, when we were alone,
he said it was plain dumb,
but I didn’t believe him
and that was cause of Mom.
When cleaning out my room today,
my story reappeared,
and today, I’m in Grade 4 —
I’ve grown another year!
I read my story, every word,
and couldn’t put it down,
and when I finished reading it,
all I could do was frown.
It was about some goblins
who opened up a store,
and then they just decided
to go and fight a war.
They fought the war for three years —
then suddenly, they won,
and then they started dancing!
The story was then done.
The story is confusing
and really makes no sense.
The more I thought about it,
the more I just got tense.
The thing the story taught me
is last year I was dumb,
and that my brother Danny
is smarter than my mom!
Writing is like that. I still have that happen to me. I look at some old stuff and go, “Who wrote this drivel?” But, there are times when I go, “That’s really pretty good. Why don’t I write stuff like that anymore?”
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I know what you mean.
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The wisdom of being in Grade 4… then Grade 5 and so it goes for ever.
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I Missed reading your delightful poems!!
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I missed you reading them!
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