
I made a tent beside the couch
with my big brother, Nate,
and everything about our tent
was absolutely great.
We used some blankets from our rooms
and chairs to hold them up,
and crawled inside when it was done
with Sonny who’s our pup.
We asked our mom if we could sleep
together in our tent.
We were excited ‘bout the night —
I thought we’d be content.
We got our sleeping bags rolled out
and everything was right.
We got inside our sleeping bags,
and we began our night.
I said, “Tell me a story, please.”
Nate said, “This story’s true.”
He said, “Our house is haunted.”
I said, “I had no clue.”
“Our folks say it’s a secret
and you, I shouldn’t have told,”
said Nate, “but you’re my brother.”
I felt my blood run cold.
Nate told me all the details
before he went to sleep.
I listened to him breathing
and from our tent did creep.
I’ve never been so frightened,
and I was frightened bad,
and cause I couldn’t stop shaking,
I slept with Mom and Dad.
Nate had to take our tent down
and tell me that he lied.
He told me he was sorry,
so I was satisfied.
Nate has to do my chore list
along with all his work.
I figure that he’s learning
how not to be a jerk.
And cause I love my brother,
I’m sure no harm was meant,
and so I’m hoping Friday night
we get to build our tent.
My nephew’s son Nate just built a blanket tent. Hope he isn’t planning on scaring his sister with ghost tales!
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Isn’t that funny! His sister should read the poem perhaps. 😊
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Blanket tents are the best! But you do have to know how much your little sibling can stand before they will tell.
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That’s an excellent point. I have a feeling you probably knew how far you could push things, Herb. There’s a certain expertise in your comment.
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lol. Experience is a good teacher.
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This is a particularly good one. I like it that he wasn’t put offblankettents forever, too.
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Sorry. I’ve gotta proofread!
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Thank you!! I’m glad he wasn’t put off them too. Blanket tents are a good part of anyone’s childhood.
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